Nowadays, compared to the past, according to the scientific school statistic, a huge proportion of parents has opted for schools which are located far away from their house. Thus, there is the relevant question of how to commute to the school and this matter requests a consideration. It is claimed that the authority should subsidize school vehicles, while others believe that the delivering duty should be included in family commitments. From my perspective, certainly, parents should be obligated to assume this responsibility, since it is challenging to adjust to a bus schedule for children, nevertheless, this solution reaps advantages and drawbacks .
On the one hand, there is no doubts that an adult person build a life and this process requires to make enormous efforts in order to reach the goal . Adult life is filled with unpleasant events, responsibilities , detrimental occasions, thereby, parents strive to ensure a happy childhood for their children, they struggle to protect their toddlers from responsibilities in childhood, since they realize that their youngsters will have them in the future. It is obvious that adjusting to a bus timetable adds the responsibility to a child, since a child should be punctual, this child should be in a right place at the right time. By delivering their youngsters to the school , parents facilitate children's responsibilities, making them a little bit happy .It is undeniable that if the government will be a sponsor of school buses, financial expenditure is necessary. In my opinion, it will be more beneficial to fund other school necessities, for instance, refurbishing school building or funding famous castle journey . Therefore, this parental activity brings advantage for their toddlers and accumulates government finance
On the other hand, it is worth remarking that the offered suggestion has disadvantage, since, unfortunately, this activity leads to the reinforcement of adverse issues, such as traffic congestions , air pollution which will be impossible to avoid. When every parent uses the public transport or a private vehicle for the purpose of getting school, the city problems will boost considerably. As a result, surrounding environment will be damaged ,the transport system should be reconstracted.
In conclusion, certainly, parents could choose more convenient, comfortable ways to commute to school. By delivering their offspring, they simplify child's responsibilities, making their childhood happy. But, this approach hardens horrible city’s issues, giving to rise some actions of the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58673469388 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26063670522 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5416811068 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342580855937 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109120295027 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575898096823 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190686587758 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741891814665 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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