Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say
– Congratulate your friend.
– Ask when would be possible for you to visit.
– Ask what present they would like.
Hello Hellen and Martin
How are you both? I hope this letter will find you well.
I am writing to you regarding the news of burth of your child that I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you both. I hope you both will bring up a very reliable man. It was such unexpectedly for me that I cannot realize this event till now. How did you both cope with this? How are Hallen's health and the baby's health? Probably, if you have some issues, I would be glad to aid you to overcome these issues.
I would desire to visit you at your convenience . What time will it be convenient for you ?
I am going to present a gift to you, probably, you will prompt, what is a required thing for your new born baby?
Sorry, if I took a long time , apparently, you both are very busyness.
Take care and write you back soon.
Have a nice day
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... hope this letter will find you well. I am writing to you regarding the news of ...
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...ing the news of burth of your child that I was glad to hear from our friends . ...
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...h of your child that I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, ...
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...at I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you...
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... I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you bo...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you bot...
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...ad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you both. I hop...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... so ecstatic, I congratulate you both. I hope you both will bring up a very rel...
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...gratulate you both. I hope you both will bring up a very reliable man. It was suc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nexpectedly for me that I cannot realize this event till now. How did you both c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cannot realize this event till now. How did you both cope with this? How are Hal...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... desire to visit you at your convenience . What time will it be convenient for you...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... gift to you, probably, you will prompt, what is a required thing for your new bo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... required thing for your new born baby? Sorry, if I took a long time , apparentl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n baby? Sorry, if I took a long time , apparently, you both are very busyness....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... write you back soon. Have a nice day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1497005988 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25392892873 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3175564224 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.2 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1333333333 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3111178345 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106777102182 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078109616268 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147474650079 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996692567256 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.61 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.