Some people support the development of factory farming and the science creation of fruits and vegetables in agriculture, but others oppose to these developments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is little room for doubts about agriculture infrastructure, there are some people maintaining it, while the opposite opinion is considered also. Notwithstanding, I would contend that supporting an agriculture developing is vital and other infrastructures should be developed.
On the one hand, nowadays explosion population is boosting day by day resulting in an increase in the demand for agricultural output, the question of increasing rural yield and farming is not unchallengeable and request an urgent solution . So, funding agricultural science which produces new plant species, new farm animals species, who develops animal drugs, chemical additional useful plant substances is significant requirement in modern society . By improving farming and increasing rural yield, human population will acquire enough foodstuffs to feed people . For instance, compared to the past, these days there are variety of species of crops, they are more fruitful than decades ago. In addition, there are diversity of chicken species who are grow up more quickly compare to other peers. Secondly, it is worth remarking that environmental repercussion has had the impact on surrounding structures , they influence on flora and fauna, giving rise to chemical structure of beings. For example, deforestation is observed , countless species insects, biological microorganisms demolish which play a survived role in surrounding environment , microenvironments. Hence, developing science is necessary to develop drugs, treatments, discover new chemical elements which afford to retain, maintain existing species, microorganisms. As a result, population explosion and environmental changes are the reason to contributing the development of the agricultural science , farming.
On the other hand, it is pointless to claim that our community has only rural issues, society has numerous problems which require implementations. Instead of spending all resources to tackle agricultural tasks, the need to solve other questions exists, such as educational reorganization, improving environmental improvements, social infrastructure, technology infrastructure . For instance, if country has a major proportion of educated individuals, natural resources will be conserved, such as gas, water, energy, prospering country. However, hungry human population is not able to contribute no one field of activity and population is increases day by day, so the question of advancing agricultural science is the first one. As a result, no one activity could not be contributed by hungry persons, so rural developing is the key to solving a great number of human’s problems.
In conclusion, raising population which should be fed forces necessity to develop farming and agricultural science and if people have satisfied conditions, are fed , they would contribute the development other infrastructures, given that advanced agriculture is necessary .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97374701671 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46912513405 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570405727924 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6089137163 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.235294118 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14578507712 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481213846104 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347217982547 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10221428857 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371462461505 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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