In the ancient era, people discovered how to create fire, invented the wheel which was the foundation in printing technology. Later on, in the industrial era, complex machines were built, motorised vehicles are used. In the digital era, all these facilities have proved their great significance to all mankind, it is claimed that the internet is superior beneficial to people in the modern world than other inventions. From my perspective, this proposition is exaggeration, despite some benefits of the internet.
There seems undeniable that the internet is really valuable to a majority of people, helps store files, disseminate information in fast and convenient way, the best way to communicate with other people. There is an increasing number people uploading their files onto the Internet. For instance, Microsoft's OneDrive is the cloud storage that provide the file storage for more than tens of millions of people. Furthermore, this is important means of communication, the internet enable collecting in touch people with different part of the world without efforts. There is messaging application, for example skype, where millions of people share thoughts monthly.Finally, the internet is paramount tool facilitates a dissemination of information, the excellent example is Facebook, it is social network, where people of different part of the world interact with each other, assists to spread ideas ,advertise some invitations, items.
Nevertheless, I believe the internet is not paramaunt importance, the first one is electricity, no one electronical device cannot function. In other word , the internet cannot be used , if there is no electricity. The second is engines, which can be seen as a great diversity of facilities, from old hydropower locomotive to today's solar-power aeroplane. If there were no engines, people would have to use animal-powers or human-powers vehicles, which is slower then mechanical counterparts. To illustrate, the speed of an average camel is approximately thirty miles per hour , compared to the car speed which two times more.The final discovery is mobile phones wich afford a digital communication in any time. This is comfortable way to communicate with someone, send a message. According to scientific statistic, the number of users of the mobile phone is greater than these using the internet for same purposes.
In conclusion, the internet has some enormous invention for the human race, but other discoveries mentioned early, such as sell phones, electricity, engines, have also an essential meaning . I predict that along with the Internet , these three inventions will still form the cornerstone of the future humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50121654501 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12521356519 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5316119598 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.611111111 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154804674037 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511109313712 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415745988774 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935671909823 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290449553159 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.