Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
At present, the standard of living in urban areas is deteriorating. Before putting forward any solution, it is imperative to discuss the root cause behind this situation.
There are various reasons behind this predicament. Firstly, increased number of vehicles in cities cause lots of pollution. As a result, people living in urban cities suffer from respiratory problems. Secondly, people have to pay exorbitant cost of living. This to say that people living cities have to pay high cost for even basic things, such as transport, house rent and food. As a result, they are not able to save money, and some people even face financial crisis. For instance, as per the report by local newspaper, 48% of the city dwellers opt for loans, as they are not able to cope of their family expenses with just salary.
There are many solutions to fight again this difficult situation. Firstly, the government should implement "Odd and Even" scheme to reduce the number of vehicles on the road, which would result in lesser pollution. Secondly, government should also provide affordable homes, so that people with less salary can but their own home rather than staying on rent for whole life. Thirdly, the scheme for minimum should be implemented by the government, so that people can get a baseline, which would be sufficient to live in large cities. For instance, government of Canada has ranked its major city on expense rating, and set a minute wage for each city based on the ranking.
To conclude, it is undeniable status of life is getting worse in major cities due to high cost of living and pollution. However, I believe this could be curb, if government provide affordable home, along with minimum wage policy and implement strict guidelines to reduce vehicle on the road.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0033557047 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57152316896 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7619275627 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118422962256 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397027724783 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437693097194 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735408672012 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00975237971973 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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