It is a fact that the count of extinct species has increased rapidly in the past few years. There are several reasons for such a situation and also a few solutions to tackle it. Both aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
Discussing the causes, the most common one is ungoverned trading and poaching activities. This is because the fur and skin of various animals are used in cosmetics and medicines. Although the government has put a ban on such trade, it is still carried out with the help of few corrupt forest officers. In 2014, when an infamous animal smuggler was investigated, it was found that 80 percent of officials were involved in killing and exporting animal parts. The other cause is the change in their surroundings and habitats due to global warming. Because of unchecked pollution and deforestation, there has been a drastic change in the natural habitats of wildlife. Therefore, there has been a huge rise in endangered and extinct species.
The mentioned causes can have solutions too. The foremost solution is to regulate laws strictly against hunters and poachers. By this, I mean that punishment should be made tougher and hefty fines should also be introduced. Not only the hunters but also the involved officials should be dealt with strictness. In addition to this, awareness campaigns should be started to help people know that if they want to protect their ecosystem, they need to be extra careful in their contribution to global warming. They should also be shown the dire consequences of them being indifferent to the fauna. Furthermore, the government should introduce more bio-reserves, wildlife sanctuaries, national parks which will stimulate the safe living environments for animals. It has been observed in a survey conducted by PETA last year that after the introduction of wildlife sanctuaries in Gujarat, five endangered species have been brought back to their normal population.
Thus, to conclude the topic, It can be finally commented that the extinction of wildlife is directly linked with the illegal smuggling, uncontrolled hunting and global warming. In order to control the detrimental effects, strict laws should be enforced on poaching and as well as people should be educated to be more vigilant towards their actions. Along with that, the focus should also be shifted on national parks and wildlife sanctuaries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, i mean, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19220779221 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83697724203 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561038961039 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7769984684 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1904761905 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17751934302 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467222305573 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349631854569 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100255083377 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291522046257 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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