Unhealty Life

Essay topics:

Unhealty Life

Health is one of the most important thinks in our life. Another thinks aren't important without health so we must know the value of health. At the sametime, we should convince our children. Espacially I said 'children' beacuse if children cant build up this informing at the beginning, this thinks will come up a trouble at the future. Therefore, how can they learn healty life ? Who take on this responsibility ? Definetely, school and family are responsibile these issue

Schools have so much advantages for children development. They learn to effect of bad habits on health. Like smoke,drugs,fast food, sleeplesness. They also build up their sleeping pattern by waking up early. On the other hand, some friendship could influence their life, even they can get bad habits.So friendships choose is so important.

First things learned by family likewise warnings too.Good eating, sleeping pattern, limit the use of technology .. These all things build up in family. Usually children eat handmade food and have good breakfast. Besides this, family are the best observer of our life.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, likewise, so, therefore, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2774566474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82490377771 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1813948506 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8666666667 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5333333333 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094771836153 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381393040779 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654191285248 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655753414731 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131737185616 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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