Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Educational institutions should welcome equal amount of applications from both the sexes in each and every course. However, this essay strongly disagree with the aforementioned statement. This essay will first discuss that university accept students on the basis of the number of applications received irrespective of whether they are filled by a girl or a boy and this essay will further discuss that students study course on the basis of their interest.
The number of students to be registered for subjects depends on the number of applications received by colleges. It is not mandatory for any university to receive equal number of enrollment application forms from both the genders and thus it is practically impossible for any campus to have equal number of girls and boys in every subject. Moreover, if the institutes will wait for balanced number of application of male and female students, undoubtedly it will be a wasteful activity, as it will delay in starting the course and imparting education to students, thus it will hamper the future growth of students. Instead they should accept application on the basis of talents and knowledge of students.
Furthermore, students, irrespective of their gender study a particular course based on their curiosity and interest. Men generally liked to get enrolled in streams such as engineering and Business Administration because they have intellectual thinking and practical mind, whereas, females get enrolled in courses such as art, history, and home science because of their creativity ability. As a result if is impossible for universities to have and equal amount of registration forms both males and females. To exemplify, according to the recent report more than 80 percent of female candidates are enrolled in nursing courses than males.
To conclude, In my opinion i vehemently disagree that colleges should have a balance of male and female students, instead institutes should accept applications on the basis of level of knowledge and talents of students, so that they can perform better academically and thus build a prosperous career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31831831832 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99948442515 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48048048048 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7392534561 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.583333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238213268702 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912633407326 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567580423875 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146230164214 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505040886515 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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