Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that universities should accept equal proportions of each gender in all courses. In my opinion, I disagree with this point of view. Men and women should have the same educational opportunities.
There are several reasons why universities should not choose students for every subject base on equal numbers of each gender. It would be unfair for students who have a good qualifications. If a university rejected a female students with higher grade to balance the proportions of each gender, this student would not have any motivations to achieve best results. Thus, universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according their qualifications. In this way, both men and women know that they would have the same opportunities for university admission.
Apart from the unfair concerns expressed above, I believe that it would be simply unrealistic. If universities decided to fill course with equal numbers in female and male students, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many subjects are more popular with one gender than the other. For example, computer science courses tend to attract more male applicants. So it is difficult to fill these course with fifty percent of female students.
In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit and it would be impractical and unfair to change the selection procedure based on gender
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2850877193 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89636782867 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548245614035 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4314424639 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0714285714 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226116607033 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081905852572 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700274964415 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137521708684 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412185212087 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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