University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is rightly said that success and development of any community and country depends on the success and development of their woman. In India it is said that woman are the source of energy and so she is worshipped as goddess. However, the situation of woman is more or less devastating in every country. The pivotal reason behind this pity condition is illiteracy rate of woman around the world. Hence, if we want to empower the women, we have to generate the resources which can provide education to every woman. However, to give reservation of fifty percent seats to the female candidate in every subject is not the solution of the problem and my inclination discord the statement.
to commence with, education is right of every child. However, the admissions in any subject should be given on the basis of merit of the student. There are few reasons behind it. First, merit procedure propel competition among the children that leads to motivate them to be an expert in that subject to avail success. Secondly, admission given based on merit can assures the good quality executives for the future.
Moreover, many a times, it is not possible to fill the reserved seats due to lack of enough applications of particular candidate. In such situation, those seats would be either left vacant or sold in a management quota to the low merit student. In both the cases, scholar and hard-working but destitute students has to bear the loss.
On the flip side, there are several other issues needs to be addressed that restricts woman education. It includes economical condition , social restrictions and personal belief of people. To exemplify, despite of several example of successful woman in India, there is still a trend exit which enforces child marriage in many communities. In this child marriage, bride losses her right of education and guided to do household chores.
To conclude with, women empowerment is the need of the time but not at the stake of reservation. I strongly believe in eradication of hurdles in the way of women education rather giving reservation in every subject.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The fourth paragraph is a little bit away from the topic. Better to say: 'Admittedly, there are some advantages of accepting equal number of male and female students in every subject.. First, ... Second, ... '
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9 //The introduction, the second and third paragraph are developed very well which can reach 8.0 or over.
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 351 350
No. of Characters: 1692 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.328 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.821 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.645 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.55 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.201 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have to generate the resources which can provide education to every woman. Howeve...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...y inclination discord the statement. to commence with, education is right of ev...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'assure'
Suggestion: assure
...dly, admission given based on merit can assures the good quality executives for the fut...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...ives for the future. Moreover, many a times, it is not possible to fill the reserve...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...both the cases, scholar and hard-working but destitute students has to bear the l...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cation. It includes economical condition , social restrictions and personal belief...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'several examples'.
Suggestion: several examples
...ief of people. To exemplify, despite of several example of successful woman in India, there is ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'as to', 'more or less']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282776349614 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.133676092545 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694087403599 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0385604113111 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334190231362 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133676092545 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0205655526992 0.0403226058552 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73209209601 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0437017994859 0.0326793684256 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107969151671 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102827763496 0.021408717616 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00771208226221 0.011925033212 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2102.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 316.048096192 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97159090909 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357954545455 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196022727273 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130681818182 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73209209601 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.037074148 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 63.7064663548 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0668231398 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 44.8727272727 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 2.125 1.69124875643 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226749326352 0.332605444948 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0890516606525 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0747519766983 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536133184051 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143450567172 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970151091797 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518935728491 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346596329514 0.324371583561 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.081725356064 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160996080026 0.228012699653 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111462750939 0.058150111329 19% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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