The issue of whether or not children should be vaccinated against deadly diseases has been a heatedly discussed topic in the recent years, and this has turned into a dilemma facing many. Some people claim that vaccination is hazardous and unnecessary while others do not agree. Personally speaking, I would assert that it is healthy and safe for children to receive vaccines.
Children’s vaccination is crucial to their immune system because vaccines are effective in preventing many deadly diseases. For children, their immune system is still developing, so they are easily vulnerable to many viruses. For example, during the smallpox epidemic a century ago, there was a marked increase in the deaths of children in many countries, yet most of the mortality was due to children not being vaccinated. This proves that a child’s immune system is not strong enough to battle against a pandemic flu or virus. Only when children receive vaccines can they grow up safely and healthily.
Many people think that vaccinating children is very dangerous. In fact, vaccinating children does not have negative effects on children but helps them grow up in an environment free from the attack of the viruses. The World Health Organization, for example, scrutinizes vaccines given to children to ensure they do not have side effects. As long as children are vaccinated in regular institutions or hospitals, they can safely boost their immune systems against endemic diseases.
In conclusion, both of the two views have their pros and cons, but still, I maintain that it is necessary for children to be vaccinated, as its positive effects outweigh the rest. Therefore, the practice of inoculation should be widely promoted and encouraged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not children should be vaccinated against d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22661870504 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80500128217 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.523106427 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217895456484 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814928813427 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485790336691 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132006628438 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632417016529 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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