What are the advantages and disadvantages of advertising?
Nowadays, advertising is getting more and more popular to our daily life. There's no doubt that it has some advantages in bringing the products close to customers and boosting sales for the company. However, advertising sometimes makes people buy things they don't need. The following essay will explain these points in more detail.
To begin with, on one hand, advertising brings products close to the customer. Obviously, people watch TV everyday and there are so many advertisings. The repeated advertising remarks company's brand in customer's minds and raise their awareness of company's product. In some cases, advertising also helps customer know more about product's features such as its color, its usage, its virtue. Therefore, they will make a better decision in purchasing.
Furthermore, advertising boosts sales for the company and creates more profit. If customer know one product better than others, they intend to buy this one. Clearly, whenever having demand for one type of product, people usually think about the one they know much first. That's reason why the company will have a chance to sale more products and earn money. For example, everyday I see the advertising of Unilever company about their washing powder which is named OMO. Thus, when I want to buy a powder to wash my clothes, I will definitely buy OMO because I'm accustomed to it.
On the other hand, sometimes advertising makes people buy things they don't really need by exaggerating the attributes of products. The marketers usually claim their product as "the best" on the market and it seems essential for customer to buy and use in their daily life. Unfortunately, many purchases that people make are unnecessary. Take my dad as an example, because of the amazing video which advertises for the wine, he decides to buy one but he even doesn't use it because he cannot drink alcohol. In conclusion, according to all the points given above, I believe that advertising has its own advantages and disadvantages. It helps customer know more about the product and make profit for company, but it also makes people buy things they don't really need in some cases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08474576271 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65379205594 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6393365772 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7142857143 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119445700664 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442868769475 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481118839808 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906826743703 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296309503515 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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