What are some of the Pros and Cons of extreme/adventure sports? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, adventure sports become a considerable debate among public all around the world. Although the extreme sports activities are regarded as thoroughly pastime and morale constructive by a considerable number of people, there are a number of people holds an opposing view. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss both positive and negative viewpoints.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support or disapproval adventure sports. On the one hand, in the logical opinion, many of these actions such as parachuting, paragliding and banjo jumping are hazardous. But for some people they are funny. For example, when I do Kite surfing in every weekend, I have a delighting and peaceful sense.
On the other hand, in against to the fun, some of these exciting sports are very dangerous. For instance, there is a high possibility of heart attack for those who do Banjo jumping. also, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers shows that there are many accidents for climbers like falling off or missing in snow mountains that happened every year in all around the world.
In conclusion, there are several compelling arguments on both sides; my personal sentiment is that despite excitement some of the extreme sports are very hazardous.
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also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78628816044 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3211633303 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139768883909 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541390539265 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568748464297 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828994511353 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020419714363 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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