When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Deciding on what career to have is one of the most important decisions for each person. There is an opinion asserting that the salary is the most paramount factor in this respect. I, for one, entirely disagree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons.
To begin with, choosing a job in the light of only the income is not the best action. First and foremost, one may end up being detestable towards detesting their career. Having a 9-to-5 job and having to be present at the workplace every single day, almost the majority of these employees hate what they are doing. All of them probably only have considered the amount of income when deciding to get hired. Second, should one tend to make money, they better take into account the future prospects of that job. In fact, in terms of salary, many job opportunities seem a logical choice at first, however, they are more of dead-end jobs, with no bright future. Thus, these jobs would be boring (mundane/tedious) with no room for improvement.
Admittedly, I understand that the salary can be a chief factor when choosing a job, however, there exist more important items here. Workers should feel that they are fulfilling a purpose and moving forward towards their goals. That being said, factors like putting effort in what you love, and being passionate about your career are of more importance. Many people’s feelings of job satisfaction also come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (paramount) must be used with a third-person verb: 'factors'.
Suggestion: factors
...g that the salary is the most paramount factor in this respect. I, for one, entirely d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6146998978 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2023242615 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208943270138 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065187844991 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530640352756 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119496578992 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325825843346 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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