When we can see films on phones that what the need of going to the cinemas is? Others say that to fully enjoy the films it should be seen in cinemas. Give both views and give your opinion.
Hollywood movies like cartoons still remain the best memories of every person even in adulthood. Cinema creates a long lasting effect on the viewers. For instance, we still remember the famous dialogues of our favorite action hero years after watching the movie. In the following paragraphs I will discuss that weather one should watch movies in cinemas which are expensive and more time consuming or either phones or tablets are better for viewing movies.
Beyond any qualms, big screen movie experience remains engrossed in our mind due to the light, sound and group experience while watching any movie. For instance, 3D movies such as Jurassic park create a real life like experience while we watch it in a cinema hall. We enter in a virtual Jurassic park where dinosaurs are roaming freely and there screaming makes us frightened and causes an adrenaline rush. Such an experience is impossible while we watch the same movie in our mobile phone. In Addendum, even the normal non 3D movies also create a better viewing experience when we watch our favorite characters on such a large screen and experience the protagonist’s emotions along with other viewers who are there to enjoy the film and give us company. Therefore, in spite of availability of free movie downloads people still prefer to buy movie tickets to watch movies in theaters.
On contrary, some people believe that watching movies on mobile phone and tablets is better as they can watch it according to their own time convenience and without wasting money. For instance,, people now like to spend their commute time while travelling from office to home by watching movies in cabs or metros. This prevents them from getting bored on the way and also keeps them busy and entertained. They not only save their time but also save money.
In conclusion, I believe that watching movies especially movies with special effects in theaters is a totally magical experience and can never be compared with watching such movies in phones. However, for people with busy schedules and financial constrains watching movies on phones are a better option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s on mobile phone and tablets is better as they can watch it according to their ow...
^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
... and without wasting money. For instance,, people now like to spend their commute ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03428571429 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53656364045 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2344447745 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106236743075 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038960026664 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045469966046 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064997815173 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374898538882 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.