In the last few decades, the population riseing has become one of the high priority challenges for many countries. This problem has involved from poor to rich, undeveloped to developed countries. This essay firstly considers of some problems and thus it will lead to a couple of variable suggestions for this worrying trend with a logical conclusion.
To begin with, in spite of workforce demanding in industrialized countries, they have a particular limited budget for education and health. They might not able to provide appropriate easily accessible facilities for all inhabitancies; As result, it will impact on further quality of worker in long term. In addition, in several countries the basic environmental resources such as drinking water or land are not available. As consequence, they have to share it, so the level of their life style could be affected like Pakistan, where their more than 170 million residences have faced with many challenges.
On the contrary, there are some variable solutions to cope or control the population rise rate. It would be good idea to contribute the people with their government to follow a strategy to make more infrastructures. It would help them to get best advantage on workforce potentials in future. Moreover, in some cases authorities can make some rules to control this hugely increase birth. For illustration, in China people do not allow to have more than two children.
To sum up, I pan down by saying that undoubtedly although overpopulation would demands more environmental and financial resources, through the useful strategies we would reduce the negative impacts of this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
... infrastructures. It would help them to get best advantage on workforce potentials in fu...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... best advantage on workforce potentials in future. Moreover, in some cases authorities ca...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'demand'
Suggestion: demand
...doubtedly although overpopulation would demands more environmental and financial resour...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the negative impacts of this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, such as, in some cases, in spite of, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25475285171 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03325313109 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5719238438 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210571484103 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731660323436 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737280944319 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123845289765 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899042779474 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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