Over the last few decades, the importance of crime prevention has become more controversial. Some people believe that it is personal duty while others claim that authorities should protect them. In my opinion, it is a responsibility for both of them. This essay will discuss two different views, and thus it will lead to discussion conclusion.
Firstly, people, who pay tax, expect their government to make a secure society for them. In other words, they argue the authorities are responsible simply because they have paid them. Secondly, normal people have not been treated to do the great reaction in criminal situations. For instance, when a serial murder has entered into a family property or a drunk driver has smashed their car, how they can survive themselves?
On the other hand, despite the government have spent a large amount of money in this area, there are still an army of victim. If every single person takes part of this task, at the end of the day they will have a safer country. For example, for prevent unsafe driving on the roads it exists many speed cameras and increase its number daily, which is huge sum money costed. Imaginary, if driver pay more attention on speed limitation and traffic signs, these sorts of device would not need it at all.
As result, although crime protection should initiate form people, most of them have not educated for involving by violent crimes. However, the government in return the taxpayer’s money are responsible. In my opinion the ideal city according to crime rate could be where everybody follows the law and have a tense of auto prevention, while the authorities provide the high level of safe environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95390070922 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64939185462 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.133668677 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262052146118 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081874812726 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785786829438 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157025295572 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101213078888 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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