You are going to travel soon. Write to your neighbor and ask for help. In your letter say– Why do you need help?– What do you need him/her to do, and when?– What should he/she do if anything happens?

Essay topics: You are going to travel soon. Write to your neighbor and ask for help. In your letter say

– Why do you need help?
– What do you need him/her to do, and when?
– What should he/she do if anything happens?

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Dear Anne,
How are you? I want to let you know I will go on vacation next week and I want to ask you a favor.

I will travel with my sister and she has cats allergic so unfortunately, Mr. Smith cannot be with us during this trip. So, I wonder do you mind to feed him during these days? I usually put his plate in the kitchen. He eats milk in the morning and afternoon and cat foods for lunch. Besides, if you take him out for walking in the night, I will be appreciated.

Although, he is completely familiar with our neighborhoods, please never open the back door. The last thing is should mention during my journey I will be online via Telegram and I always check my email as well. So, if any unexpected event happens, feel free and send me a text or you can even call me. If I am not available , you can talk with my landlord Miss. Adams. She always gives me the best solutions.

With Love,
Mari.

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Average: 5.5 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ever open the back door. The last thing is should mention during my journey I will...
^^
Line 6, column 324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... can even call me. If I am not available , you can talk with my landlord Miss. Ada...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18407960199 0.247107183377 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.1592039801 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0398009950249 0.0946595960268 42% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0746268656716 0.0501214627716 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.164179104478 0.0437548338989 375% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10447761194 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.00995024875622 0.0403226058552 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.36035611545 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0149253731343 0.0326793684256 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00497512437811 0.00163938923432 303% => OK
Determiners: 0.0547263681592 0.0861772015684 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0398009950249 0.021408717616 186% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 916.0 1933.35771543 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 316.048096192 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20454545455 6.12580529183 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20517956788 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.215909090909 0.374742101984 58% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.125 0.28420135186 44% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0965909090909 0.203846283523 47% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0511363636364 0.137316102897 37% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.36035611545 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.037074148 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.56093040696 123% => OK
Word variations: 73.9038375038 60.7387585426 122% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.5714285714 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4224658649 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4285714286 127.492653851 51% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.357142857143 0.814263465372 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 25.0714285714 49.1944974215 51% => OK
Elegance: 0.75 1.69124875643 44% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266164732659 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0581834637265 0.102741220458 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.053340822809 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.424430335171 0.534860350844 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179738320978 0.148594505496 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833870903491 0.134430193775 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753896470465 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.191725311853 0.324371583561 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.046674153116 0.0638462369009 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196543306679 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680161163673 0.058150111329 117% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 2.0 10.4468937876 19% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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