You are studying in a college and your friend recently asked your opinion about it.
Write a letter to your friend explaining the college and giving your recommendations.
In your letter, include:
why did you apply for admission to this college?
what do you like and dislike about it?
would you recommend this college to your friend? Why?
Write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
I am really happy to get a letter from your end after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that
you are seeking my help in pursuing your master degree. Well, I have taken admission in A&M Management college because of its reputation and cost of the course. As you might know that my college has ranked 18th in QS survey last year. Moreover, it will cost me only Rs. 20 lacs to complete my degree including my accommodation.
The best part of this college is the teaching methodology and professors behavior. We can ask numerous questions on semester courses, and they always response properly. Needless to say, the hostel facilities are the best in the country (as per QS survey). However, course contents are rigorously packed; one can hardly find free time to do extra activities. I believe this is good, as they are preparing us for tough professional careers.
If your GMAT score is more than 650, you must apply without any hesitation. Furthermore, you can give my reference in filling up the application form, which will be beneficial in getting shortlisted.
Hope, I can clarify all you doubt about my college! I will wait to see you in the next term.
Best regards,
Bibhu Kalita
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'amazed'.
Suggestion: amazed
...your end after almost 2 years, and I am amaze to know that you are seeking my help i...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... its reputation and cost of the course. As you might know that my college has rank...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67174408339 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702830188679 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6171240325 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3846153846 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279425659229 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786171844757 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722429214288 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142540263776 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435366912986 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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