You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I have recieved a letter from your bank about being charged $70 for the overdrawn of $240 from my bank account. I want to inform you that I am completely unaware of this transaction.I am also very shocked when i got to know.
Surely someone cheated on me. Someone used my atm card without my knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my card in uber when I was returning back to my flat.But that day i called that uber guy to return back my card at my address and he returned me back on the same day.I was very busy that day , I did not got the chance to check my bank detail. After then I forget to check.
I have a doubt on the uber driver . Surely he misused my card that day.I have a request to you to please withdraw complete detail of my account about when $240 overdrawn to my account and from which ATM cash was withdrawn.
I would be grantful if you will help me in this matter.
YOURS SINCERELY,
ANCHAL SAINI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... completely unaware of this transaction.I am also very shocked when i got to know...
^
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...transaction.I am also very shocked when i got to know. Surely someone cheated o...
^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e used my atm card without my knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my car...
^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hout my knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my card in uber when I was r...
^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...y knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my card in uber when I was returning ba...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...i had forgot my card in uber when I was returning back to my flat.But that day i called that u...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...er when I was returning back to my flat.But that day i called that uber guy to retu...
^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... returning back to my flat.But that day i called that uber guy to return back my ...
^
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
....But that day i called that uber guy to return back my card at my address and he returned m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...and he returned me back on the same day.I was very busy that day , I did not got ...
^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on the same day.I was very busy that day , I did not got the chance to check my ba...
^^
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...ay.I was very busy that day , I did not got the chance to check my bank detail. Aft...
^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...got the chance to check my bank detail. After then I forget to check. I have a doubt...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...heck. I have a doubt on the uber driver . Surely he misused my card that day.I ha...
^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...er . Surely he misused my card that day.I have a request to you to please withdra...
^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n this matter. YOURS SINCERELY, ANCHAL SAINI
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18888888889 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30766614323 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2842463511 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25669137631 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117249640073 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123253244318 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214828665757 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140179757109 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... completely unaware of this transaction.I am also very shocked when i got to know...
^
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...transaction.I am also very shocked when i got to know. Surely someone cheated o...
^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e used my atm card without my knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my car...
^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hout my knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my card in uber when I was r...
^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...y knowledge.I remember last month i had forgot my card in uber when I was returning ba...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...i had forgot my card in uber when I was returning back to my flat.But that day i called that u...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...er when I was returning back to my flat.But that day i called that uber guy to retu...
^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... returning back to my flat.But that day i called that uber guy to return back my ...
^
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
....But that day i called that uber guy to return back my card at my address and he returned m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...and he returned me back on the same day.I was very busy that day , I did not got ...
^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on the same day.I was very busy that day , I did not got the chance to check my ba...
^^
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...ay.I was very busy that day , I did not got the chance to check my bank detail. Aft...
^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...got the chance to check my bank detail. After then I forget to check. I have a doubt...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...heck. I have a doubt on the uber driver . Surely he misused my card that day.I ha...
^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...er . Surely he misused my card that day.I have a request to you to please withdra...
^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n this matter. YOURS SINCERELY, ANCHAL SAINI
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18888888889 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30766614323 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2842463511 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25669137631 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117249640073 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123253244318 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214828665757 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140179757109 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.