You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.
In your letter, you should tell:
• why you ride a bicycle to work
• what the problem is with the parking
• what your suggest are.
Dear Manager,
I am writing to inform you that since last week, I faced a problem at the parking where I park my bike, while I attend to work during the week.
I live next to my workplace 15 minutes far by bicycle, that’s why I prefer to ride my bike. The reason is, there will be more free space to park and avoid traffic congestion. Coming by car need more time and car parking costs more than 50 pound per day.
The problem that I’m facing at the parking is that, each day when I leave work, I find the lock is scratched, and my rear wheel is down, as if someone trying to steal it. I asked the employment there if he saw anyone doing this, but he told me that none can access the lot without his permission.
I would like from your side, to permit met access the cameras at the security room, to check if someone is trying to steal the bicycle.
Thank you for your time, hope hearing from you soon and take this issue into consideration.
Sincerely Yours,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you that since la...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pound' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pounds'.
Suggestion: pounds
...time and car parking costs more than 50 pound per day. The problem that I'm fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37297297297 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21637441756 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9366176324 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196101291938 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066120381381 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622111021202 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104170601935 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610353526288 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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