You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
As the world is growing everyday, every day we are inching towards one more severe issues like population, education , nature imbalance, crime etcetera that's impacting our world in a massive way. Considering this , its hard to imagine what would be our world like in another decade, this essay would bring some of the issues which might sadly scar the situation even more.
To begin with, no country can ever flourish in a corruption laden society. But unfortunately, this is the truth of today where Corruption is destroying society at all levels. As majority of the politicians are uneducated, illiterate politicians or products of nepotism who really dont know about good politics except for minting money, providing no aids or respite to people, rather spoiling the situation except only worsening the situation. For example - It is so easy to find these days that some of the top-notch politicians are serious criminals, who have many criminal cases behind them including deadly cases like murders. To get rid of this situation, the government must regulate things like fair voting system, making sure politicians should have a basic education degrees to contest and then periodic checks of the elected politicians by an elected body would make sure that all wrong doings are checked in time.
Furthermore, the other big issue arising is Brain Drain, where all the skilled and qualified people are leaving the countries because of lack of funds, infrastructure, medical services, pension system, social security systems etcetera and are moving to richer and more prosperous countries for better options and lifestyles. For example - Statistics shows that everyday skilled doctors, nurses, engineers are moving to richer countries like the USA, The UK, Australia for better choices. Here , Government must intervene by providing better infrastructure, creating more jobs and provide better services to retain the talent and skilled generation back home.
To conclude, though these problems are deep rooted and affecting the country and countrymen severely but a proper intervention and regulations by government would definitely lead to a better tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...severe issues like population, education , nature imbalance, crime etcetera thats ...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...tion , nature imbalance, crime etcetera thats impacting our world in a massive way. C...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a massive way" with adverb for "massive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rime etcetera thats impacting our world in a massive way. Considering this , its hard to imagine...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...world in a massive way. Considering this , its hard to imagine what would be our w...
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Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, then, except for, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42136498516 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7892667914 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632047477745 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2790734778 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.090909091 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6363636364 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106936393396 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408467724193 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262715617543 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627585710021 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136964295506 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.