You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
We all follow advertisements to take purchasing decisions. To what extent they significantly influence depends upon the viewer's perception of the advertisement.
A person who has lesser understanding will imagine that all that he watches on TV, news papers and hoardings are real products which are of good quality since a branded company has advertised. They are gullible and buy those products even if not required for a household and show no remorse over their reckless spending. For example, a middle income person sees an I Pad advert and orders one online immediately even though he owns a laptop already which can alternatively serve his purpose. This is a waste of money.
A smart consumer always looks for value added products in the market and adverts aid in making them understand a products value . He will actually choose to purchase the above device when he does not have a laptop. If he understands from the advertisements that this device's life span is only one year, he will opt to purchase a computer or an android device enabling him to save money. A truly intelligent man always scans media looking for alternative product information which will offer him optimal satisfaction through price range and its productivity. He can make economic decisions based on what he sees from many choices as well and this will increase consumer satisfaction when correct and useful info is digested by the viewer.
To conclude, I do not agree to the viewpoint that liking everything online is a good idea as trying to acquire each and everything one likes will cost an arm and a leg. From this, we all should learn a valuable lesson that you are the choice maker and take advertisements positively as they are easily accessible shopping catalogues which reduces your number of shop visits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
...ignificantly influence depends upon the viewers perception of the advertisement. A p...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'I'?
Suggestion: an; I
...or example, a middle income person sees an I Pad advert and orders one online immedi...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... making them understand a products value . He will actually choose to purchase the...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devices'' or 'device's'?
Suggestion: devices'; device's
...tands from the advertisements that this devices life span is only one year, he will opt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9701986755 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8503771836 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62582781457 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1772741423 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805458473734 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338973962145 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362494277972 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565787319335 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197214916276 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.