Young people say traveling to different countries is benefit them and society. Agree or disagree
Nowadays, many young people increasingly traveling to different countries. It is believed by some that it is largely advantageous. I agree with this notion.
There are a number of reasons why this is a positive phenomenon. Firstly, there are tremendous opportunities for fun, adventure, discovery. when they go to different nations, they get deep insight about the ways of living and cultures about that countries and they are more likely to appreciate their living style and traditions. Also, They discover differences and similarities between their own culture and same of another country. when they come back, they become better and more informed citizens. Also, it is a very fruitful course of action for their career. For instance, they can find work in other countries and lay a sound foundation in their desired field, and also a businessman can expand their network internationally.
in addition to, even they can bring business ideas to back home and can also help their countries to set up some kind of business there and it will add to economy of that country. Moreover, traveling may bring them out of their comfort zone, as there will be situations that they never encounter before, and They will get confidence because they would realize that they can do things despite the alien environment. for instance, my friend commute overseas every year owing to work purpose and there were many situations over there when he had to make a decision on their own, which improve their decision making skill and also boosted his confidence.
Summing up, youth travel is very beneficial for youth as they learn a lot from other countries cultures and traditions. so, I believe everyone should travel at a young age to widen their horizon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96853146853 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64853389099 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 286.0 20.2975951904 1409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1421.0 106.682146367 1332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 286.0 20.7667163134 1377% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 86.0 7.06120827912 1218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13642383412 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13642383412 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131255350492 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999519955014 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 145.0 13.0946893788 1107% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -218.81 50.2224549098 -436% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 114.8 11.3001002004 1016% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.03 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.13 8.58950901804 246% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 116.4 10.1190380762 1150% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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