Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Give the cause.
As discipline plays an increasingly more central role in society, it has been observed, that there has been decline in conduct in adolescents not only in term of politeness but also in giving respect to others. There are several reasons behind this tendency which will be discussed further.
One main factor that put forward as a prime reason for this behavioral change in youngsters is, globalization, as world is becoming like a global village, mixing of cultures resulting in disturbing by-products. Most of the people in India are attracted towards westernization and trying to mimic them. Even though, it got some advantages like freedom of living and women empowerment, it also got some detrimental trends like short-temper and disobeying elders. Therefore, the composition of cultures with respect to behavior of people cannot be underestimated. However, this is just a tip of an iceberg.
Another variables to be considered as prominent causes for this happening is, parental education and technology. In today’s contemporary era, most of the families are double salaried, and in the process of running behind money, people are ignoring children, as a consequence they are more intended towards over use electronic gadgets and internet to over-come the alienation, which leads to change in attitude towards society . Our past generation, for example, used to work in nine-to-five jobs, and went home every day to eat and chat with their children about the day. This millennial, in contrast often employed in digital nomads, working on sporadic timings and lack of routine, results in different way of attitude towards children to our ancestors.
Despite there are many reasons that leads to the change in attitude of young people, composition of different cultures , parenting and technology are main causes. It is all in the hands of senior family members, to mitigate this issue, they need set a good example to youngsters by spending some quality time with them in a meaningful way.
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...by spending some quality time with them in a meaningful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, in fact, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96840479522 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2726369128 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121792412755 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041803117495 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460842280728 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675316799748 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304429537504 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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