The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?
technology nowadays has reached to the peak worldwide. there are a plethora of factors might participate conspicuously in developing the current technology. however, some people refer these enhancements to the young generations only. this matter is arguable one of the most debatable issue, as I think success has not linked to any particular age. this essay will explore this point in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
Firstly, there is no doubt that the innovative era that we have these days is helping people at different age groups to participate effectively and develop our technology. To illustrate, there are a plenty of powerful channels such as media might offers a great aid for creators to show their innovative notions to the public in order to be sponsored by various companies. therefore, the quality merely of the created product is what companies are looking for. Secondly, although younger generation might raise in technological era where a lot of facilities are existed to help them, there is a real competition among them to differentiate themselves. For instance, sponsors nowadays are looking for lucrative projects to invest. Thus, judging might be extremely difficult for applicants and eventually they select limited individual to sponsor.
Finally, old generations who have belonged to past era were struggling a lot to display there advance idea. they have had several limitations in terms of financial support, times and even recognition. they were fighting for ages to demonstrate their shining notions. Ultimately some of them only succeed and become very famous. KFC founder, Adeson, Anichtine and many other examples of inspirational individuals who have worked very hard to change the life. people were not believing on them, no financial support have been provided but eventually with very hard-working they develop our life.
To sum up, in spite of young gung generation that living in very innovative era, they still suffering from very high competition to be selected by sponsors. In contrast, lots of old people have strived in their past days because of poor sponsors and lack of recognition channels. however, in very hard-working their reached to their dreams. therefore, it’s extremely difficult to say that only young generation have the leverage on the involvements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37874659401 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9493568634 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58310626703 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1724430661 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.19047619048 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0889062985905 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282180296935 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314610470042 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528095298254 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330909663287 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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