Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">In modern
times, families have become exposed to several types of challenges. These
challenges are results of the rapid change of technology which has its own
impact on society and individuals. One of these changes is the ambition of
family offspring to leave parent house and live an independent live. This
ambition is considered to be beneficial but it has its disadvantages.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">In the
meantime, teenagers have an easy access to a wide range of knowledge through
the social media platforms, which have a positive impact in their motivation.
According to an article which was published on New York Times Newspaper, more
than 30% of teenagers are welling to leave their parents’ house in order to
have more freedom in their life style despite the challenge of financial responsibility.
Referring to the same article mentioned above, only 10% of these youngsters
need to live alone for the reason of starting their career and commencing the
improvement of their life style.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">Thus, the
benefit of this kind of development is that we can have young people to be an
addition to the working force of the country. This will ease the parents’ life furthermore;
they will become an added value to the country’s economy. On the other hand, this can result in a
growing number of youth crimes which will be caused by the lake of supervision
for those who have no future ambition.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">At the end,
it is required to allow children to develop their mentality as well as earning
the enough knowledge to define the correct path to follow. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">In modern
times, families have become exposed to several types of challenges. These
challenges are results of the rapid change of technology which has its own
impact on society and individuals. One of these changes is the ambition of
family offspring to leave parent house and live an independent live. This
ambition is considered to be beneficial but it has its disadvantages.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">In the
meantime, teenagers have an easy access to a wide range of knowledge through
the social media platforms, which have a positive impact in their motivation.
According to an article which was published on New York Times Newspaper, more
than 30% of teenagers are welling to leave their parents’ house in order to
have more freedom in their life style despite the challenge of financial responsibility.
Referring to the same article mentioned above, only 10% of these youngsters
need to live alone for the reason of starting their career and commencing the
improvement of their life style.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">Thus, the
benefit of this kind of development is that we can have young people to be an
addition to the working force of the country. This will ease the parents’ life furthermore;
they will become an added value to the country’s economy. On the other hand, this can result in a
growing number of youth crimes which will be caused by the lake of supervision
for those who have no future ambition.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">At the end,
it is required to allow children to develop their mentality as well as earning
the enough knowledge to define the correct path to follow. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 41.998997996 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3548.0 1615.20841683 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 538.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.59479553903 5.12529762239 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.96800410559 2.80592935109 284% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.291821561338 0.561755894193 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 993.6 506.74238477 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.681173082 49.4020404114 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.428571429 106.682146367 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.4285714286 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 48.0 4.38176352705 1095% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139947614845 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820970017169 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477720551751 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529115225786 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643457601819 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.53 12.4159519038 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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