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The most important thing in these days is the internet. Some people think that they get a lot of good information when they use the internet everyday. Other people claim that if they use the internet a lot of time, they will be not clever.In my opinion, I agree with first group which using internet is helpful ways to earn a lot of the useful information.
First of all, the internet has a lot of information that people can know about the world. For example, before I wanted to go to the USA, I looked at Google because I should have to know about the USA such as the best places, food, and hotels.
Second, students can not be excellent in their school without use the internet because they can look for webs that will help them to solve their homeworkes. The more student use internet, the better they get a high score at school.
Third, it is not true if people think that the internet has not any problems, but they can fix it. Also, there are more major for helping people who have problems when they use the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... information when they use the internet everyday. Other people claim that if they use th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... a lot of time, they will be not clever.In my opinion, I agree with first group wh...
^^
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majors'?
Suggestion: majors
...t they can fix it. Also, there are more major for helping people who have problems wh...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, third, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40837696335 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22761179835 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 618.680645161 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1712789773 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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