actors should have more private time for themselves than before.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings were thirsty to find practical ways to seize specific skills to become well-known. At the current time a broad rage of occupations and abilities can pave a path for people to become eminant including actoring, being an athlete, or entrainers. Nowadays, there are contentious discussions about the circumstances that noted people experience in their private lives. Some people believe that famous individuals should allocate most of their time to their fans and allot less time for themselves; while others stand at the other side of the continuum. I personally concur with the latter group, and I will elaborate on my reasons hereunder.
To commence, from my vantage point, celebrities are not separated from the society, and they are also members of the community that other people live in; therefore, it is their own right to have more privacy than they experience. In many countries if a stranger disturbs someone while they wants to spend some time by themselves, that person is actualy violating others' ultimate rights; this fact is also true about well-known people. Their fans can not force them to decrease their private time to spend more time with fans since those supporters are actually give trouble to eminant people by asking for some irrational requests. In order to put it into a vivid picture, a practical example can illuminate the previous concept. Brad gift, Oscar-winning actor, once explained to a reporter that some of his fans demanded him to meet them in some public places at the time that he and Angelina had their first baby born; he could not accept their requests because he need more privacy for his family than before, but his fans did not understood him at that time, and they somehow disturbed Pitt.
Furthermore, having privacy is one of the crucial factors for people with special skills to categorize their minds in order to do their professional jobs in a highly-qualified level. Majority of famous people: athletes, actors, and entertainers usually need some time for themselves to have decipline thoughts; they are involved in different kind of activities such as performing their tasks, meeting their fans, reporters, and so on; hence, famous people should allot a part of their daytime to set a scheduled program for themselves, and entertainers usually need some time for themselves to have decipline thoughts; they are involved in different kind of activities such as performing their tasks, meeting their fans, reporters, and so on; hence, famous people should allot a part of their daytime to set a scheduled program for themselves, and spend some time to improve their abilities. A survey that has been done about Hollywood actors, shows that 39 percent of well-know actors spend enough time in privacy in order to have successful lives. To sum up, famous individuals should spend more time on their private life because it is their right like other people; besides, they need privacy to set scheduled programs for their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... a stranger disturbs someone while they wants to spend some time by themselves, that ...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...ans since those supporters are actually give trouble to eminant people by asking for...
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Line 2, column 1035, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'understand'
Suggestion: understand
...amily than before, but his fans did not understood him at that time, and they somehow dist...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a scheduled program for themselves, and entertainers usually need some time for ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt of well-know actors spend enough time in privacy in order to have successful l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08853118712 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69636925349 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486921529175 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.941919623 48.9658058833 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.642857143 100.406767564 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282826068793 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884530888747 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625313355664 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18830184333 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459062874925 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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