A/D:
It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.
It goes without saying that problems have become an inseparable part of people`s lives and solving them has a great influence on us. Some people may hold the view that people should use their own knowledge and experience to solve problems. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should solve their problems by asking other people for advice. I personally, subscribe to the latter idea due to fact that ever person, undoubtedly, has limited knowledge and experience about everything, and as a result he cannot cope with all his problem. Moreover, finding a way without assistance of other is time consuming.
To begin with, it is established beyond doubt that solving problems requires wisdom and familiarity or experience. It is an inevitable fact that every person has confined knowledge about something, and he may aware of answers for some difficulties not every dilemma which he face it. Furthermore, every person faces some obstacles in his life and experiences them. It is axiomatic that one man does not have all of the word`s problems in his life. I am trying to say that people need others knowledge and experience to solve their problems. If people ignore other assistance, they could not solve their problem easily. Not only does asking others for helping cause problems are solved easily, but also accurately. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above. Once, I had a problem of installing a software in my workplace. I did not see that software, so, I could not find how I can install it. I ask my colleague who has used the software to help me. He could fix its problem easily and correctly.
The second reason which is worth mentioning is that finding solution for any problem is time-consuming. There are two ways for discovering solution; experience by a person himself or others. Suppose every person wants to solve his problem by himself and experience every problem?? It is obvious that many problems need to be solved immediately. It means that if person wants to experience by himself and then find the solution, that problem cannot be solved and he just waste time. “Predator after death of man is not useful”, it is a proverb in my country that means people should detect key of luck without delay, and otherwise, they will fail. The results of a study carried out by Tehran University`s graduate students unveiled that the possibility of finding the key of the problem could be increased up to 80% if a man use other experiences.
In summary, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that people should use other knowledge and experience for solving their problems instead of just trust on themselves. Believe it or not, according to my own experience if person try to solve his problem by himself without helping others, he could not solve it correctly. Not only is it solved with mistake, but also with time-consuming. It is recommended that people have been learned asking others advise without any difficulty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...difficulties not every dilemma which he face it. Furthermore, every person faces som...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...is axiomatic that one man does not have all of the word's problems in his life. I am ...
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Line 3, column 793, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hed light on what was elaborated above. Once, I had a problem of installing a softwa...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... solution, that problem cannot be solved and he just waste time. 'Predator a...
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Line 7, column 451, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to ask'.
Suggestion: to ask
...commended that people have been learned asking others advise without any difficulty. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, in summary, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.962890625 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83079916626 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 802.8 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2956210117 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424388503574 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122608041572 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843039723445 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303552189069 0.150856017488 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575381235405 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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