People in general always depend on someone to support in their life. Many qualities of a person that connects with them in order to get help in needs of disparity in life circumstance. In my opinion, one of the qualities will be telling the truth in a relation. I strongly agree that by speaking the truth in any relationship strengthens the relationship and increases the trust worthiness.
First and foremost, by speaking the truth one can enhance their relationship with their acquaintances. No matter what people come to the truthful person to discuss their issues in life as they have the notion that truthful person can give them an honest feedback of their situation. For instance, when I was doing my teaching practice at a public secondary, I had my school associate to observe my teaching in order to get feedback about my teaching style. My school associate didn’t expand much on performance instead she said overall my performance was good. When I was reflecting my teaching on that day, I knew that I didn’t do well. As a result, I was looking for someone that could give me a clear picture of what went wrong in my teaching so that I can fix it next time and pursue a career as an educator. So, I asked another school representative to observe my teaching where she clearly pointed out that formative assessment was bit harder for students to follow and hence I found dissatisfied with my practice. Thereafter, I had her come in and observe my class for consecutive four day. In that case, she provided me with vivid picture of what was I doing wrong and how I could improve that. As a result, I trusted her because she was honest in her feedback by telling the truth what went wrong in my lessons. Hence, I was quickly able to mend my lessons and had a successful practicum experience. Thereafter, I trusted her if I need any help in anything I need as she could give a truthful advise what needs to be done. This strengthened our relation from just being a colleague to be my trusted friend.
In addition that, by speaking the truth increases the trust people have on other people. So, they will be trusted to handle confidential matters. For example, I do work with many special need students such as students with autism, Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder, learning disability, cerebral palsy. Parents of these young children need to know how their child performing at school academically as well as psychologically. So, parents reveal some of the confidential documents to me to go over and give them report. I take into consideration of these documents along with anecdotal evidence, ample of observation I provide them with honest report. Instead of wishy-washy I provide them with an honest report of where their child is now and what measures can be taken e to improve their performance. Many parents appreciated my truthful report and they encouraged me to continue my service. Peoples’ trust can be gained by telling the honest report of a child’s academic and psychological performance. By being truthful to the parents, I gained trust of many parents at my school.
In conclusion, it is always vital to speak the truth in a relation that
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Suggestion: bitten
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... as psychologically. So, parents reveal some of the confidential documents to me to go over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 88.0 43.0788530466 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2648.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8233151184 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93366802387 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431693989071 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.9 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0716798437 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6071428571 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114969230458 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410391913287 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555658972774 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116118355777 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592764388435 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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