always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship?

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always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship?

People always trust who tell the truth, much easier than those who never know about it. honestly always is the main factor in any relationship among people. I totally agree with this idea for a couple of reasons. first of all, everyone can trust each other easily. secondly, people can find more fiend and true friends. Because of these two reasons, I agree with it.

to begin with, trust and relationship are two ways road, If you tell the truth definitely people can have a good friendship with you otherwise after a short time they could recognize that you are not trustable, and disconnect you. To make this point clear, In my office, there is a guy who always tricks people with many leis to attract them, unfortunately, after while his colleagues recognize the lies so they start rejecting him with many excuses. I am wondering why some people try to make other people attract by saying many lies. Why are they very comfortable with lying.

On the other hand, when you try to be honest and tell the truth always to people, as a result, you can find more friends and of course, good and loyal friends who are always with you in sadness and happiness and they always have a very good relationship with you. for example, most of my friends who are with me for a long time are my honest friend, even if they sometimes get mad about me, but they also get back to continue their friendship with me.

To sum up, honestly always make people be very much interested in you to have a long relationship with you, although, it is very difficult to keep telling the truth. I always prefer to do that and I am happy about this fact. In addition, I always keep this characteristic with me

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f these two reasons, I agree with it. to begin with, trust and relationship are ...
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Suggestion: comfortable lying
... by saying many lies. Why are they very comfortable with lying. On the other hand, when you try to b...
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...have a very good relationship with you. for example, most of my friends who are wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in fact, of course, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51960784314 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39169474804 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6934167107 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185240374067 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675074246813 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756871998683 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135224913385 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414745679339 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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