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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Give suitable examples and reasons to support your answer.

In my perspective, telling the truth all the time is the most important consideration in any relationship between people because not only honesty is essential for any relationship but also, telling lies can change your personality. In the next paragraphs, I will pinpoint my reasons.
First, relationships among friends are very fragile especially when they are not old enough. One characteristic which is essential for keeping a friendship is honesty. It shows how much your friends can trust you and tell you their secrets. By knowing the secrets, the bond between friends becomes stronger and it helps a person to be more reliable in their relationship. For instance, a person who has an honest friend which tells him the truth all the time can rely on his friend when he has a problem. Also, he is sure that his friend will not reveal his secret to other people. Moreover, honesty builds a good image in the minds of other your friends and they will care for you. For instance, when a person has an issue in his life, his friends that know him will come to aid him since they know him as a nice person.
Second, not telling the truth can alter the person's personality. Since, telling a lie is a bad habit, in a long term, continuing this habit can become ordinary for you which makes you a liar. Moreover, lies which is an inappropriate habit can help you to achieve something that a person does not deserve. Since the person did not try to gain it, it can be easily achieved by telling lies and after that put him in difficulties. For example, one of my friends applied for a job. He added skills to his resume which was not familiar with that. After getting a job, he started his job in that firm but after a while, he faced a problem solving the problem that the company was faced. Finally, he got fired and was banned from applying to that firm forever. Therefore, it is best to say tell the truth all the time, or in other words, honesty is the best policy.
Furthermore, there are more advantages to being honest and saying the truth all the time since not only, a person can be more reliable but also, telling lie can put you in trouble after a while.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...nd, not telling the truth can alter the persons personality. Since, telling a lie is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51145038168 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5142060877 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47582697201 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6618002273 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.65 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129157922738 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440738019922 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744160378816 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11469898512 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103226577141 0.0645574589148 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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