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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

In today's world, the relationship between people is auspicious. people are always looking for someone who can trust them and be more reliable in a tough situations. A controversial question that is raised regarding this issue is whether always telling trust is most important in the relationship or should sometimes keep secrets and don't tell a whole story to their friends. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more fruitful. I personally, content that this is a multifaceted issue in half of the circumstances. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is sometimes we can handle the situation that doesn't need to tell our friends about that. In this way, we keep our privacy and don't need to worry about the future. although the best way to attain other people's trust is by telling the truth, but sometimes it makes a hard situation for us. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. When I was a teenager, my mother always worry about me and ask a lot of questions about my routine at school. It made her be more comfortable and felt that she can handle all situations. But when I went to college I learned not to tell her all the story of my life because my decision about certain events made her upset and angry.

The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that telling the truth always makes a moment when we can use others' experiences. For example, when we get in trouble we can not trust everybody in our life except a little group like our parents. In this way, we know by telling a trust they will help us to get out of trouble.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I think always telling a truth has both positive and negative effects on our lives. Consequently, it is highly recommended that people before telling the story, think about the results and consequences of their truthfully.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ationship between people is auspicious. people are always looking for someone who can ...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...st them and be more reliable in a tough situations. A controversial question that is raise...
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Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ip or should sometimes keep secrets and dont tell a whole story to their friends. So...
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Line 1, column 769, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
...ing reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is sometimes we can handl...
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Line 1, column 847, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...etimes we can handle the situation that doesnt need to tell our friends about that. In...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t. In this way, we keep our privacy and dont need to worry about the future. althoug...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...nd dont need to worry about the future. although the best way to attain other peoples tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, whereas, for example, i think, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77534246575 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73925475399 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523287671233 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0431853374 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233921573506 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736795179116 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076256866055 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152288854851 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525690239516 0.0645574589148 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, whereas, for example, i think, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments