Are the benefits of mass tourism greater than the problems that it causes Why or why not

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...h in time leads to greater plurality in ones thought patterns, which is something wo...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts may get damaged during the visits. Therefore, in my humble opinion, the ben...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an existentialist way" with adverb for "existentialist"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...han its problems. I do understand world in an existentialist way and that forces me to support any kinds...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 237.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13080168776 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75899039269 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3054400183 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192330294635 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669797934399 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600645024527 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108379286796 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246083121191 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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