Because modern life is very complex, it is essential to have the ability to plan and organize. Agree, disagree?
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human beings have been preoccupied to keep pace with the modern life. While some people prefer to base the foundation of their life on a haphazard manner and make decisions instantly, others stand at the other side of the continuum, believing that it is essential to be capable of planning and organizing to adapt to the fast-pace society they live in. As far as I am concerned, I agree with this mentality that one should have a precise and meticulous planning and be organized in order to flourish and live the modernized life. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, if a person is endowed with the ability to have a thorough planning for his or her life, he or she will not waste their time and make the best use out of their life. To be more specific, the hectic life that has been overshadowing every individuals' life requires a permanent planning and scheduling that make the person enjoy every moment of his or her life. Not until the person anticipate the future and have a comprehensive plan for the time to come, he or she will not be able to make use of every moment of their life. An example can drive this notion home. When I was a high school student, I wanted to become a doctor in the future; however, I was in two minds. At that point I decided to let myself go and if everything was not going well with my decision, I could change my field of study. With the passage of time and the emergence of modern life, a huge change like changing one's major of study was a severe problem that cost the expense of one's life. If I had a careful plan in the past, I would not have wasted my time.
Furthermore, having a well-designed plan will fuel and guarantee one's success in this modern life. It is crystal clear that with the emergence of various technologies and the emergence of the internet, in particular, people are equipped with assortment of entertainment. Under such a circumstance, care must be taken not to shift one's concentration from one's dream to unnecessary, temporary joy and happiness. The flourishing on an individual is highly dependent on the way he or she devise a plan for himself and organize his wants and desires. As an illustration, when I was in the university, I had a thorough plan to take step according to which. While most of my peers humiliated me for being so strict and not being flexible in my planning, I had faith in what I was doing. Having graduated from the university I became an astronaut working in NASA, and my peers, those who ridiculed me, are still a simple worker who have not become successful for not being organized and for not having a plan. If it was not for the planning and the schedule that I used to follow, never would become as successful as I am now.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe that it is vital to have a plan in this complex life because the lack of which will lead to a waste of time and failure. Planning and schedule help the person not waste their time, and to become successful in future.
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...te their time, and to become successful in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2594.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 573.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52705061082 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71803229066 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465968586387 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8722972753 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0454545455 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283331348401 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824179878323 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742856904862 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1845152951 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297414807479 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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