Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. U
Undoubtedly, Our modern life is much more coplicated than the past, and for being successful, young people need to think criticaly about their life. Whaile many people believe that it is important for youth to have the ability to plan and organize, others are agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of veiw, I think young people do not need to know how to plan and organize. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.To begin with, students are able to use a lot of devices that help them how to plan and organize. In fact, nowadays we have a lot of free online facilities and programs that are created to make a plan or orgnaize an event. With knowing a little about the computer and the internet we can use this application for our need. For examle, I have been studying at highly respected university, and our program is intense with a lot of classes and activities. Actually, I am very weak at planning, but I can plan for my busy program only with using some smart technologies. Indeed, young people don't feel that they must improve their planing and organaizing ability because technology makes our life comfortable.Furthermore, young people can get help, when they think that a plan is needed, from other people who are expert in planning or organizing. Nowadays, society have a lot of concultant centers to give services to young people. To cast light on this, when I was at high school, I wanted to plan for national university entrance exam, but I didn't know how should I plan and organize my time. Fortunately, student service center provided me a uniqe plan to maximize my performance, and I get a great plan for free without knowing anything about planning. Although improving our abilities to do everything might has plenty of positive benefits for people, why we should spent time and energy for things that we already have access for free. Therefore, ability to plan and organize is not essential for young people. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the ability to plan is not necessary for young people. This is because young people have a lot of equipment to help them, and also there are plenty of life coches that can plan for young people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70179948586 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71405403536 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516709511568 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6614034099 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3125 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452448819511 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164793176295 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104593212048 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.452448819511 0.150856017488 300% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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