changes in our day
As years pass, everything changes. However in this last decade everything has changed from a toe to the head. Nowadays we have led our lives to technology and we act like always we had this phones, computers, social networks.
Everything is double edged sword but if we put negative and positive sides of technology to the scale, then we can see that positive side of internet is heavier than negative. The internet is a splendid media for communication. With a help of internet we can communicate with our friends, family or meet with new people and forge a relationship with them. Or internet helps us in different way for example it helps us to buy or order something from outside. Moreover it supplies us with information about all over the world.
First of all, before the internet advanced there was no contact between family and children or some other near relatives. That is why, the pace of losses increased. However, now everyone spread all over the world and without internet they can’t keep in touch. In a word, internet brings all the people closer. Last century no one knows what is phone, computer, even goggle box. Nevertheless today, it seems that everyone depends on them.
Secondly, internet is a source of data. All of us want to be aware of some info from all over the world, and at that time internet acts as auxiliary. While we have internet we don’t need to buy a lot of reading materials. Just one or two clicks you can have all the information with every details.
Moreover, with developed technology you can speed up your works. For example, if you have to pay money to an enterprise that is not in your city or in your country, then plausible you will appeal from a bank which’s system is lean to the internet. In addition, if you want to travel some country then you haven’t to go out and walk for a mile, you can order this ticket from internet and you can room. Everything is easier with internet.
Last but not the least crucial use of modern technology is cameras. Nowadays you can see cameras every where, they are there for several reasons but for the same function, recording. If you control the business, you have to have camera in your building to be more close to your workers, and for to be sure that you are not deceive by your workers. Cameras can help for police for reveal some crimes.
In conclusion, the internet and development of technology are beneficial for us in any case. And I just want to end my essay with statement of Miep Gies ‘Children who use the internet are much better informed than when I was young’.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
As years pass, everything changes. Howev...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
As years pass, everything changes. However in this last decade everything has chan...
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Suggestion:
...phones, computers, social networks. Everything is double edged sword but if ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...to buy or order something from outside. Moreover it supplies us with information about a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...at is phone, computer, even goggle box. Nevertheless today, it seems that everyone depends o...
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Line 11, column 98, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...s cameras. Nowadays you can see cameras every where, they are there for several reasons but...
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Line 11, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...to your workers, and for to be sure that you are not deceive by your workers. Cam...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deceived'.
Suggestion: deceived
...s, and for to be sure that you are not deceive by your workers. Cameras can help for p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68260869565 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61504300261 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9719733327 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9285714286 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0296747575791 0.236089414692 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00837387676746 0.076458572812 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252657005046 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0202126665542 0.150856017488 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390825170205 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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