Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life

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Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life

Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. I do agree with the statement asserted. There are several reasons due to which I claim so.

First of all, every child enjoys his childhood to the fullest as he is unconcerned and imprudent about the outside world. In Childhood children live there life with great zeal and enjoy every single moment of it. This is because he is not sure about the competitive world and the businesses around him right from the childhood. For example, in childhood the person enjoys the rains and plays a lot with his parents and acquaintances which he probably won't be able to do when he starts with his jobs or starts studying in the universities because he won't have the time for this and may think it childish. Nevertheless, in childhood the children can be forgiven for his mistakes, which is less likely to happen when he grows up and is in company doing job.

Secondly, in childhood children always go to their hometowns or to their relatives place for the summer or winter vacations if they live in cities. While, when the child grows up his schedule becomes quite hectic and he is not able to go for vacations as the time period for it is quite less. It is during the childhood that a child has all sort of time to do things he like and is not isolated enough to any conditions.

Thirdly, it is rightly said that childhood is happiest time of a person's life because child do not have to work hard for earning in his early age and is being provided by each and everything which he desires for from his parents. But, on the other hand when he grows he needs to take care of his family do jobs and earn reputation for his family by getting a good degree.
So, due to the above reasons presented I feel that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Childhood is the happiest time of a persons life. I do agree with the statement ass...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the happiest'.
Suggestion: is the happiest
...rdly, it is rightly said that childhood is happiest time of a persons life because child do...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...id that childhood is happiest time of a persons life because child do not have to work ...
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Line 8, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...hat childhood is the happiest time of a persons life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'for example', 'i feel', 'sort of', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211267605634 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.16338028169 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0676056338028 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056338028169 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0901408450704 0.0685040099705 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135211267606 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0197183098592 0.0351676179071 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43413005262 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338028169014 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0056338028169 0.00188951952338 298% => OK
Determiners: 0.0901408450704 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0056338028169 0.0209618222197 27% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0253521126761 0.0139019557991 182% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1802.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 332.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42771084337 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262048192771 0.338922669872 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19578313253 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135542168675 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0903614457831 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43413005262 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478915662651 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.6179559623 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7142857143 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0922955289 48.84282405 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.644075263715 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 43.2925989673 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.18181818182 1.45489161554 81% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383444881743 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132810505966 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.090291010131 0.0752933317313 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621316659736 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158322998031 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207035312883 0.114077575197 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175504979376 0.0781384742642 225% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35031199741 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112485421153 0.067059652881 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31306685421 0.210909579961 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959761079437 0.0618886996521 155% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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