Children should choose a job that is similar to their parent' jobs or a job that is vary different with their parent's job?

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Children should choose a job that is similar to their parent' jobs or a job that is vary different with their parent's job?

It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and progressive world where we live, parents have been preoccupied with the concern of whether their children become prosperous in their jobs or not. In this regard, while some people believe that children should continue a job that is similar to their parent's job, others stand at the other side of the continuum, holding the opinion that they should choose a different job from their parent's job. As it relates to me, I concur with the former group because of two main reasons. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.

First and foremost, children can avoid wasting their time and money by choosing a job similar to their parent's jobs. It is crystal clear that parents can provide their children with a lot of information and pieces of advice from their first-hand experiences in their jobs, which can help them to become successful. With their help, children can enlarge their vision and broaden their knowledge about the conditions and difficulties they face in their careers and easily evade them. An example can drive this notion home. In my country, Iran, there is a famous family that works in the Teflon industry. Their grandfather started their business 100 years ago by creating utensils with Teflon. His sons continue his legacy by spreading out their business outside of Iran's borders and export their products to some countries such as Iraq, Turkey, and Qatar. Nowadays, his grandsons continue their business by using the science they learn in the university in the field of polymer engineering and expand their market to European countries. When his grandchildren, who are responsible for the factory, talk about their business, they always mention the positive effect of their grandfather's advice on their prosperity and how they face difficulties and use the opportunities to avoid bankruptcy and losing their wealth.

Another equally significant reason to be expressed is that when children select a job that is similar to their parents' job, they can use their parent's fame in that career, to make more money without any special efforts, unlike the people who start their businesses. For example, there is a reputable law firm in my country that manages by a young man who recently graduated from university. Unlike other graduated students who have to work hard to start their firm, this young man avoids hard works and spending his time as an intern since his father is a famous lawyer that works for more than 20 years.

All in all, having considered all the reasons and examples mentioned earlier into account, I strongly support the idea that children should continue their parent job or at least choose a similar job because of two reasons. First, they can use their parents' ideas, and second, they can avoid some necessary experience they need to become prosperous.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, at least, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2412.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06722689076 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5518111196 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8722820757 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446279781507 0.236089414692 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155797667963 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160120673474 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329939805987 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111996377827 0.0645574589148 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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