Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.• automobiles• bicycles• airplanesUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
• automobiles
• bicycles
• airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Today’s magnificently developed world has made human life more comfortable and luxurious. Also
Current developed world has enormous facility to offer to people of all status. Similarly, it has myriad option available for transportation such as enormous range of cars, auto – scooters, planes, charters and ships. People prefer to use them as per their convenient. Although it is difficult to draw a single choice of transportation out infinite options but seemingly aircrafts/airplanes has shorten the distance of one zone of world to another zone.

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seemingly aircrafts/airplanes has shorten the distance of one zone of world to another zone.
seemingly aircrafts/airplanes has shortened the distance of one zone of world to another zone.

has been proved very beneficial machine of transportation.
has been proved a very beneficial machine of transportation.

whether I and my husband are flying together or not?
whether my husband and I are flying together or not?

various mean of transportation are available,
various means of transportation are available,

choice differ from person to person.
choice differs from person to person.

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