Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
Automobiles
Bicycles
Airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a very popular fact that transportation has played a vital role in human evolution. It all started with a wheel and now we have a plethora of options when it comes to various transportation vehicles. To decide which one has played the most significant role in improving people's lives is debatable. But in my opinion, airplanes have had a staggering effect on human development. This is primarily due to the fact that no other mode of transport has helped with globalization as compared to air.
Airplanes have only made the world a smaller place. By this I mean, compared to the times when people traveled by water for months together to reach one country to another; we can now reach any desired location within a few hours. This has rapidly increased global ties between countries. Due to the ease of commute and reduced travel time, countries are now building better relations with each other. They have opened their homes to global investors. The import and export businesses are now booming. This is helping a lot of underdeveloped countries boost their economy. The rapid globalization is brought about primarily due to the increased connectivity.
Indeed, the globalization that is brought about by the connectivity that airplanes provide, has helped many cultures to evolve. A simple by-product of globalization is the migration of people from one country to another in pursuit of new and better career opportunities. This implies that people from different cultural backgrounds are required to blend in with each other. They are supposed to be tolerant and considerate about each other's culture and backgrounds. The natives would have to put in extra effort to make migrants feel at home. This alone gives people a different perspective that they would not have had if not for globalization. My hometown is a compelling example of this. There is an international university in my hometown that attracts students from all over the world. Given that the regional food in my country is spicier than the rest of the world, certain locals in my hometown came together to open up new restaurants to suit the tastes of these international students. This made the students feel very warm and welcomed and encouraged more global students to attend this university. A simple step towards inclusion brought about unexpected name and fame to my hometown.
Another upside to this small step was that it created new job opportunities. Students could now support their tuition fees by being a part-time chef or a waiter. Like this, there are so many success stories of how increased connectivity has led to increased job opportunities. This would not have happened to this scale if we were not connected by air.
In conclusion, airplanes have played a vital role in changing people's lives by providing avenues of better connectivity which has led to rapid globalization and increased job opportunities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i mean, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07291666667 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97358086484 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495833333333 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3240145622 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9655172414 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5517241379 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68965517241 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0591042966469 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170624118501 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234182475328 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394887355909 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207763970092 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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