ddo you agree or disagree? parents today are more involved in their children's education than they were in the past?
Since the beginning of the current century, parents have become so busy and stressed. Some people believe that parents nowadays are more involved in their children education; However, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts in this belief. From a personal perspective, parents today do not have enough time to educate their children, given that life today is very expensive and competitive, which burden their shoulders with plenty of responsibilities. Below I will strive to explain my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, recently the cost of living has increased drastically, which forces parents to work extend hours to earn more money. A recent survey conducted by The National Association of Finance in California found that, both parents now want to work full-time jobs rather than part-time jobs. Provided that, parents work forty hours per week, they will not have enough time to study with their kids. Consequently, the costly life may limit parents’ availability time.
Next, coupled with the high cost of living, stress in another reason why parents could not spend enough time with their children studying. A vivid example that could be given to shed light on what was elaborated above, parents in the developed countries, such as Canada and The United State have a variety of responsibilities, given that they not only should work hard; but also, pay mortgages and do grocery shopping. Furthermore, job market has become so competitive, thereby parents should take courses in their free time to promote to better positions and pull up their future with lots of thrives and prosperity. Consequently, in this stressful life parents could not involve in their parents’ education.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point that must be born in mind. The technological invention, such as the internet maximize kids’ ability for merely study; thus, Kids nowadays may not need their parents’ help to study. To put it in another way, provided that children need any information, they could use search webs, such as Google and YouTube; so the internet could augment children fundamental knowledge and confidence. Therefore, technological inventions help kids to study alone.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, parents today are less involved in their children education than they were in the past. It is suggested that schools design learning activities to help students to be more independent.
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Suggestion:
...help students to be more independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33656174334 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83709674708 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569007263923 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5484149871 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296591603084 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091955764618 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974274226447 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192361936964 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104081136083 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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