do you agree or disagree with abroad studying?
Education is a crucial factor in humans welfare. By education people can obtain respected professions more easily. Some people prefer to continue their education abroad to try something new, others complete their education locally. In my opinion abroad study is better than local education. Reasons of this point of view are discussed in the following essay.
First of all, studying abroad is very challenging, you can face a lot of problems being in other country than your homeland. You don't know anything about traditions or habits of its people. You might also not be fluent in speaking the native language. Moreover, you feel lonely as you don't know anyone there. This adventure attracts a lot of people to experience it. They enjoy the difficulties found in it, and they feel even happier when they conquer all theses challenges. For me, I got the chance to visit Canada, I went there to do internship related to my studies. Language was not a problem for me, but the Canadian culture was extremely different than it is in my homeland. It was very exciting experience and I learned much about the Canadian people and how to account on myself without accompany in stressful situations.
Second, by studying abroad you may have better quality of education that might not exist in your country. Especially if you are from a developing country, you can miss up a lot of opportunities by avoiding travelling abroad. The fact that education and industry are related, makes it appealing to search for pioneer countries regarding your field of study. For example, you can have better aerospace engineering education in one of the countries which are leading in manufacturing airplanes. Another practical reason for abroad studying is to start a new life in there. People tend to search for study opportunities in advanced countries, where they can obtain a promising career rather than a simple job. In addition, they may also start a family there to continue their life there forever.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that abroad studying is very beneficial. People can make use of it in many ways according to their preferences. One may think of having better quality of education, or to enjoy the travelling experience, or even to stay their for life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...anadian culture was extremely different than it is in my homeland. It was very excit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00530503979 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76379335484 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3021818063 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.625 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7083333333 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201341236971 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609021648682 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683110131382 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118137912815 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432475016813 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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