Do you agree or disagree with the following sentence? In the past, Young people depended too much on their parents to make a decision for them; today young people are better able to make a decision about their own life.
It is generally accepted that to determine is one of the crucial issues in society owing to it will effect on several parts of our life. Some people believe that young people always need their parents to help them in their intention; nevertheless, other people think that they can decide alone. However, it is very difficult for us to prefer one to another because both of them have their advantages or their disadvantages. As matter of fact, it is vital that we able to resolve about our life because of a couple reasons.
In the beginning, one of the primary reasons is that by the advent of modern technologies, people can make lots of friends in various environments of their life, such as workplaces, university, and so on. In fact, this issue provides an apt ground for them to increase their knowledge by talking with their friends. For instance, when I was 18 years old, I wanted to go to university in another city where I could reach my goals. This determination not only was serious but also was essential for my future. Although I was worried about this event, I talked to one of my friends who has a condition as same as me. Also, she explained the positive and negative aspects of this subject to support me. Hence, we will able to decide by getting familiar with many people in our surrounding.
Second, the most persuasive point is that the time for reading books has increased among young people. Generally speaking, this affair assists them to grow their ideas about the significant topics of their life. In fact, if people utilize their knowledge that to reach by studying the different types of books, they could improve their skills in making a decision. For example, before I wanted to get married that is one of the difficult intentions of all people. My information about marriage was extended by reading some books related to marriage. Given this issue, studying is a good way to develop their skill in own life.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that today young people expand their ability about determination; therefore, nevertheless, there are many approaches to improve people’s ability to make a decision, studying some book and having some friends are considerable factors in our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...cial issues in society owing to it will effect on several parts of our life. Some peop...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are considerable factors in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83762886598 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68059451205 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538659793814 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1033555045 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.277777778 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320964844389 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953688432462 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073878877558 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209455558239 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369590807211 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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