Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is compulsory for university students to take a variety of courses, one of which is history. Truth be told, whether it is necessary for students of various majors to take history courses or not has generated a lot of controversy lately. Some people are the leading proponents of the premise that history courses should become optional for students whose major is not history. However, I assert that taking history courses is crucial for every student, regardless of their majors, since the sole purpose of universities is to educate students to work and improve their countries' conditions. In this respect, studying history plays a pivotal role. In the following paragraphs I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that learning history is vital in order to avoid making the same mistakes twice. Each and every country has made countless mistakes throughout the history. Students should study these mistakes in order that they can contemplate their country's future, make plans, and consider possible mistakes. Consequently, they can make a plan to avoid past mistakes, and better progress in today's competition between various countries.
Moreover, another conspicuous aspect of studying history is that learning cultural heritage is of utmost priority for every student. I firmly believe that people should have comprehensive knowledge regarding their traditions, and customs. Only by knowing their culture, can people make progress and excel in modern technology. Researchers in my country have carried out a research which indicated that countries that corporate their cultural values in their technological development, are more likely to succeed. That is, countries should modify new technologies to fit their people's needs. If modern development is compatible with people's necessities and values, they are more inclined to use it.
Admittedly, not to mention the essential role of history in international relationships would be an oversight. Only by studying history, can we recognize our friends and foes. We can realize that which countries have assisted our country in predicaments, and which countries have put a knife in our backs. Thus, we can form better international relationships, and further improve our position in today's world. Establishing trade routes with countries that are considered as allies, can improve the country's economy significantly. The astronomical soar in domestic expenses can be compensated with foreign trade.
To recapitulate, studying history is crucial for students, because they are the future of our society. By studying history, we can avoid repeated mistakes, excel in technology, and form foreign relationships, all of which can help our country make notable progress.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98998209996 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524822695035 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4692234819 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184085838543 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586530013925 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423408560092 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105301558652 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646672138025 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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