The issue stated by the topic is whether or not all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Some people think that it is better to take history courses. Others may disagree; they prefer not taking history courses. In my opinion, not all university students should take history courses.
First, it is not necessary for IT majors to learn history courses. The history courses are not important for IT students because it will not affect to student’s future job. For example, take the founder of the well-known Microsoft Corporation, Bill Gates. Before he turned Microsoft into a successful commercial software company, he began his career as a software engineer. Although Bill did not know the history knowledge, he could still to success his company. He establishes his commercial empire. As you see, history courses are important for all university students since they can success in their jobs.
Second, not taking the history courses allows some students to focus on other courses because they have a lot of courses such as presentations, projects, and classes. For instance, four years ago, I attended a science university in South Carolina. I had many courses such as chemistry and biology. It is important to stay on top of all my courses and to get a high-level grade. On the other hand, taking another unimportant course such as history course puts me under stress and wastes my time. For example, at the same time, I attended a science university in South
Carolina, my friend, Josef, attended to the science university in Texas. He had more courses such as history course. He spent much time to study all of these courses. He had depression from the stress. He told me that some course like history did not allow me to focus on the other important courses.
All in all, though some may oppose my opinion, it is clear that not all university students should be taken history courses because it is not necessary for some students and it is allow the students to focus. That is why all university students should not be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
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...t necessary for some students and it is allow the students to focus. That is why all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87297297297 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59845011961 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427027027027 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9518554269 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3913043478 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0869565217 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328568789342 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115948017595 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144047364672 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231218932441 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140751520016 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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