Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives have already taken place.
The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes, which have been made in humans' lives. Perhaps the most important milestone of these two centuries is the changes which have been made in science and technology. There is no doubt that they are improved enormously. Besides, they have become perplexed and intricate. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether the most important development in humans' lives has occurred. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that by the progression of human knowledge, technology and science, quality of people's lives have developed dramatically than past time. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons in the number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, it is the incumbent upon the government to increase and improve the quality of people's lives in any given society. Broadly speaking, human beings need to live in a thrived and flourished society, so, the technology and science would guarantee the well-being of people. As a palpable example, with the advent of sophisticated technology in recent years, people now are enjoying a great internet accessibility and computer use. In fact, computer and the internet are of utmost important qualities that people should have in the society. With these technologies, not only can people keep in contact and communicate with others from the different part of the world but also can socialize and improve their social activities. Also, it is beneficial for students as well, due to the fact that without internet hardly can students keep on their education. To elucidate more on this issue, we are now witnessing that this technology has taken place in vast majorities of societies all around the globe.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is the development of public transportation. If we take a minute to ponder over it before the technology takes place, a plethora of people had some trials and tribulations getting to their destination in time and people had to use their own cars. Air pollution, traffic congestions were two significant problems which people had to confront. For instance, myriads of people suffered from toxic materials emitted to the atmosphere and many diseases like bronchial troubles were popular among elderly. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that with the development of public transportation, already taken place in many societies, these problems could be solved vigorously without spending a vast sum of money.
However, every coin has two sides. Not all qualities took place in the society. In fact, various qualities like education and universities, resolve inflation, recover from the economic recession and so forth are needed to guarantee the welfare of the people. For example, in many societies hardly can people attend high ranked universities due to the paucity of facilities. So, they have to migrate to some abroad universities to continue their education. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, so, well, as to, broadly speaking, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2775.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21616541353 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89454825575 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516917293233 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 882.0 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6715438141 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.730769231 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238185240702 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583251359845 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413885918196 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107743809723 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650979104003 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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