Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
By and large, it established beyond doubt that telling the truth is crucial in people’s life. In this regard, everyone in any relationship needs some factors to make a good relationship. There has been no shortage of doubts among the relationships on whether it is beneficial to always telling the truth is essential, or it is not necessary, to tell the truth always. It seems better for people that are always telling the truth. In the following paragraphs, two crucial reasons will cogently illustrate this point of view.
The first thing that comes to mind is that if people want to have a strengthened relationship, they will always tell the truth. People must be trying to build a good relationship. Also, they should consider many factors to have an excellent relationship, and one of the factors is the truth. When people are telling the truth to each other, as a matter of fact, they can trust each other. Moreover, people can keep relationships for many years. For instance, in a family, if a mother and father tell the truth to each other, they will make a relationship in-depth and can keep that for many years. As a result, telling the truth not only is a critical factor in any relationship but also makes close people to each other in any relationship.
Another equally important point in supporting the view is that by telling the truth, people can boost their confidence because of this, they can be a role model for others. However, if someone is telling a lie, other people cannot rely on him. So, he has a bad influence on others; besides, he cannot improve his confidence. When people are confident, they can achieve their goals and helps others, for instance, in the workplace. If someone tells the truth to their colleague, he will reach the pinnacle of his job.
In short, all of the reasons mentioned above lead us to the conclusion that people are just telling the truth in any relationship because it is a crucial factor. Furthermore, people can raise their confidence and build a healthy relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... it is not necessary, to tell the truth always. It seems better for people that are al...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ch the pinnacle of his job. In short, all of the reasons mentioned above lead us to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in short, as a matter of fact, as a result, by and large, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80056980057 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76355332327 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4801276194 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6842105263 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294783939507 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115841426485 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650834943615 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203872048907 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607373742772 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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