Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. has this change improved the way people live? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food is an essential part of our life. Today’s individuals can prepare meals easier than they could in the past due to the improvement of food preparation. We can enjoy a greater variety of food and eat more healthfully. All of these are related to the modern method of food preparation.
The microwave oven helps individuals to prepare meals easily and quickly. Most of the people these days do not have enough time to go shop and cook something in old-fashion ways. So, using of microwave oven gives individuals an opportunity to serve their time doing other activities. After they prepare a meal fast, they can go to the cinema, play soccer and have fun with each other.
Also, there are various new methods of preserving foods. It means a person can make something one day and save the leftover of it on the freezers, refrigerator. In this way, they can eat different kinds of food on other days. Moreover, it is easy to put the fruits and vegetables which come from other countries to freezers and eat another time. As a result, they have food always available which they are completely different meals.
Finally, people can eat healthy food due to the modern method of transportation people. Fresh fruits and vegetables are available all over the year. On the other hand, modern’s kitchen appliance makes it easy to prepare vegetables and fruits for cooking. For example, the bread machine helps preparation easy. We can eat fresh with more choices and more convenient.
In conclusion, modern’s kitchen appliance allows individuals to prepare a meal faster and save time. they can enjoy their lives because of healthful eating. People can have food available at any time and choose what they want to eat by save leftovers in freezers. These reasons which mention above make prepare a meal faster for those nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...to prepare a meal faster and save time. they can enjoy their lives because of health...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nowadays' or ''?
Suggestion: this nowadays;
...on above make prepare a meal faster for those nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90967741935 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64929653161 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512903225806 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7178664741 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139039594859 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439031103397 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371213510425 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084193684012 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302419654942 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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